So we have reached the end of our little journey. For those of you who have come in fashionably late, a brief recap is in order.
This story was my very first attempt at writing a sequel to my debut novel, Shades of Love. It was supposed to be the first of about two or three stories which attempted to move about four years in the future with the happy couples and show what had ultimately happened to them.
I still intend to write something of a sequel to that novel as I plan on turning about four of my short stories into something more coherent. I've already re-written one (A Betrayal of Vows) and I'm currently in the process of the first round of editing. Not sure if I'm going to keep it as a chapbook or continue to turn it into a longer novel, or do both. In any event, it's a pleasant dilemma to have.
However, that is not the point of this post. The point of this rare double post is to ask you the reader, your honest critique of my story. I'm looking for good feedback, as I plan on turning this into another chapbook, and obviously, as it presently stands, it simply isn't that worthy.
So tell me honestly, what you liked, what you disliked, what needs pumping up, or what needs toning down. Whatever your opinion is, no matter how brief or detailed it may be, I want to know. It's only through readers like you, that can help me grow as a writer.
So as it says in the comment section, Give me your best shot. I can take it. If I couldn't, I wouldn't have created this neat little blog that you decided to grace with your presence today.
I sincerely thank you in advance for your participation in this endeavor.