Before we move on to part two of this particular story arc, does anyone have any questions about what they've read so far? Content? Why I wrote it that why? Why I was going off in that particular direction to begin with? No? Well then, let's move along to part two.
I had problems galore with this particular story, most notably trying to figure out where the breaks should be. My original intent was to make each one a stand alone serial, which is why they are so short to begin with. Problem was, since that kind of short story writing isn't exactly my forte, I didn't know where to properly stop. I kind of was getting the hang of it with this story, and by the time you read the last part next week, I had it down pat.
In this story, I expanded just a tiny bit on the twins peculiar relationship, and gave another shot at writing violence without going over the top with it. Also in this story, I introduce what you can probably call a "bounty hunter" into the mix. Or rather, an alien bounty hunter, since the overall theme of this story is vampires, which is sort of alienish. Right?
I know I'm not quite making sense with this post, because I'm having a hard time trying to remember what the original concept was with this story. However, when I start posting the companion long story entitled The Anointed One, you should be able to get a clearer picture of what the original concept was, especially since I'm now remembering it as I type this paragraph.
Concept for this story: Vampires/aliens on Earth. Concept for the other story: Alien life form, circa DS9 (if you follow Star Trek, you'll get the reference). Other story, a bit nastier with the violence and sex.
In any event, its something to look forward to. As for here, I now present to you part two of Persona Non Grata (On A Mission).
The action picks up in the desert where Aissa is now on her bike rolling down the highway.