tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5468858293961151587.post7572786229145225973..comments2023-08-19T08:21:42.894-04:00Comments on Cedar's Mountain: "Saturday" (pg 9)G. B. Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09783331838434598963noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5468858293961151587.post-21085439645645807692009-05-20T17:17:46.690-04:002009-05-20T17:17:46.690-04:00It's funny, but the closer I was to the end of the...It's funny, but the closer I was to the end of the story, the harder it was to finish it.<br /><br />Then I thought of the ultimate swerve: introducing someone who was never mentioned in the story to begin with.<br /><br />If you remember, our intrepid heroe's adventure started when a brush started rifling through his pockets.<br /><br />Nowhere did I mention a bansai tree.G. B. Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09783331838434598963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5468858293961151587.post-87810688931093333022009-05-20T10:27:25.922-04:002009-05-20T10:27:25.922-04:00LOVED it! The crazy bonsai tree will get you ever...LOVED it! The crazy bonsai tree will get you every time, remind me to stick with full size trees.Jannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5468858293961151587.post-67887713416469628982009-05-19T06:01:00.000-04:002009-05-19T06:01:00.000-04:00Thanks.
I do try my best. This story actually was...Thanks.<br /><br />I do try my best. This story actually was pretty easy for me to write. The premise was simple (running errands) and adding the funky stuff was a snap.<br /><br />I may try this type of stuff more often.G. B. Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09783331838434598963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5468858293961151587.post-65003644005132426602009-05-18T23:53:38.033-04:002009-05-18T23:53:38.033-04:00Really good stuff here! Pulled me in, makes me wan...Really good stuff here! Pulled me in, makes me want to read more. NIce work!Luciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10200461709137056253noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5468858293961151587.post-3124242012767666372009-05-18T17:16:00.000-04:002009-05-18T17:16:00.000-04:00Charles: Beats being stalked by a bonsai tree. At ...Charles: Beats being stalked by a bonsai tree. At least with a bear you can see what's coming from a mile away.<br /><br />Bearman: Thanks. I would imagine that the smell has got to be overpowering.<br /><br />Sad part is that I've met people with that kind of good personal hygiene.G. B. Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09783331838434598963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5468858293961151587.post-31013193093843707502009-05-18T13:59:00.000-04:002009-05-18T13:59:00.000-04:00See that is what makes you such a good writer. Yo...See that is what makes you such a good writer. Your imagery was so good I could almost smell you coming off the page.Bearmanhttp://bearmancartoons.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5468858293961151587.post-76806589383709417672009-05-18T12:41:00.000-04:002009-05-18T12:41:00.000-04:00Definitely being "stalked" by this bear.Definitely being "stalked" by this bear.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.com